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How does the night end

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"Triumph"

Move me

past words,

vortex

delving,

only

longing.

Single

purpose.

Take you

as mine,

devour

your kiss,

burning

my soul--

fire

for you.

Emblem

branded,

your name,

my skin.

My

victory.

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  1. this night lives on.

    the day is just going to get in the way!


  2. The rhythm of the poem is a very regular short, pounding beat. You know, some thing like the rhythm of s*x.

  3. Whew steamy---shower time!  Just loved it well done!  Cheers!

  4. Fascinating  

  5. Shared victory is pure victory. "In the heat of the night" hubba hubba!

  6. This night will end in ecstasy, my dear, total and complete ecstasy.

  7. This one is very warm and moist, yummy...

  8. I'm so just going to change my name to Victory instead of what it is. Sound good to you babe? Wonderful poem by the way. I love it. But see I love all your work so just don't listen to me..Listen to the people who know all the different forms and ways to write poetry.

    By the Lady, Blessed Be.
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