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"Acceptance" - septolet

Beauty

gleams

in your eyes,

can I fall?

Can I belong

to you

alone?

Information on the Septolet - http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/septolet.html

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your

hands

there are two

soft powerful grip

love from both?

arms that

hold?

(this is just a fictional poetic response

in a septolet conversation...i envisioned two ppl

standing lookng at each other

at some crossroad, you know..

plus i had to try the septolet!

im going to stomp around

in 14's today now...lol)

Eva, youre inspiring, all these forms.

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Accept OlÃƒÂƒÃ‚Â© ? Si !
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You are great at finding new forms and doing them so well! I love the simplicity in this one. I am a firm believer in less is more. I love the last three lines, it resembles a subtle yearning to be someone's only one.
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Why are the short forms so difficult for people? I've seen more stumble over Haiku, Clerihews, Limericks, Cinquain, Quatrain, Triplets, Couplets, and Monorhymes. I like the form and your use of it.
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Have passion, love unconditionally, never regret, and listen to what your heart tells you. If your heart tells you that you cannot, then so be it.

By the Lady, Blessed Be.
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I love this form and your poem. As much as I like words, I am always fascinated by short forms. They say so much.
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How incommodious of me.
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An economic helping of words with a liberal helping of desire. Very nice.
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It fits the definition extremely well. Another title that comes to mind is "Possibilities." My compliments.
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Yes. Conservation of words is very important. We must wipe out EWD. (Excessive Word Disorder, the new poet's disease)
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"Wow Girl, You are going off!",

I'll have to trial out some of these.

I love how you have done a verity of different forms and not a bad one yet.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )
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It really fits the description given in the link. The words are romantic. All together a work that is heart-felt.
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