How does this look in a resume?

Question

I currently work at FedEx Kinkos and I hate it. I just completed a yr there. My manager doesn't listen to me and I am not getting any of the training I think I need to work there. I don't feel like the company cares. Im looking for another job and updating my resume. I came up with an objective and I was wondering what you guys thought. Please read and give feedback.

(I am looking for a retail position to build and expand my work experience and hopefully grow in the company. I am well equipped to handle hard situations and work well with others. I am a fast learner and am always up for a challenge.)

Answer 1

It is difficult to see negative statements in our own speech writing. Read, read and re-read everything you write. If this was your objective statement, consider wording it like this.

Seeking position to build and expand my work experience for growth and promotion.

This part needs to go in your cover letter--

I am well equipped to handle difficult situations that enable a smooth work environment. I enjoy challenges and am a quick study.

Answer 2

you should NEVER complain about your past or current employers to the person your  hoping will hire you.. it shows that you can be difficult and they'll think you'll act the same way with their company.. not a good thing

Answer 3

I think that although the objective is great, the first sentence alone should be enough.  You could even shorten it to:

Objective- To secure employment with a retail company where I can use existing skills while learning and growing professionally.

The last two sentences would be better off in your skills section, maybe.

Answer 4

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