How good is this poem?

Question

2C

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letters till a word

wrote not heard

now here third

for a little time spent

my lines look bent

and my thoughts i lent!

so if you want in other words

these dont take up space like thoughts from birds

but if you can still follow

this poem tryed to not be 2 hollow

and if these lines you need to swallow

then fix that need be

and give this back to me

but at least you got to see

Answer 1

Its not too bad, a bit to basic in its rhyme pattern, the last line doesnt feel like a finality, didnt seem wrapped up well. Spell out 2 . If you have a three sentence rhyme scheme throughout you are missing one in the words, birds section

Answer 2

its ok

Answer 3

ok

Answer 4

A poem does not need to rime every single line and if you are going to write a poem do not use any numbers unless you spell them out.