How is my Japanese handwriting?

Question

http://picasaweb.google.com/bakaeigo/Things/photo#5237953582303408498

Answer 1

Quite nice. Is that Katakana or Hiragana?

Answer 2

Good Japanese handwriting :)

But, it just need a bit of improvement that's all. Nothing major.

If you have a Kanji dictionary with all the strokes, that would help you a lot with your handwriting.

Answer 3

caiptal letters -> you need to improve

BO bu ga NATSU ko ni ka I mono ni i ko u to I tsu TA.

NATSU ko ga s**+ n DA ke do, BO bu GA mu s**+ s**+ TA.

BO

4th stroke is too short

NATSU

first stroke is too long and last stroke is too short

I

imbalanced

I

imbalanced

TA

imbalanced

NATSU

same as first 'natsu'

DA

imbalanced

BO

same as first 'bo'

GA

3rd stroke is too short

s**+

2nd stroke is too short

TA

imbalanced

Answer 4

try to make your kanji more solid(: