How is my Yu-Gi-Oh beatdown deck?

Question

Alrite I have been working for a while on an effective deck i have sold most of the cards i own to get this far and now i am at a dead end please help.

Super Maha(43)

Monsters

Maha Vailo x3

Vorse Raider x3

Gemini Elf x3

7 Colored Fish x3

Cyber-Tech Alligator x1

Giant Red Seasnake x3

Man-Eater Bug x2

Morphing Jar x1

Magic

Axe of Despair x2

Black Pendant x1

Fairy Meteor Crush x2

Horn of the Unicorn x3

United we Stand x1

Mage Power x1

Premature Burial x1

Fissure x1

Graceful Charity x1

Graceful Dice x1

Swords of Revealing Light x1

Mystical Space Typhoon x1

Heavy Storm x1

Traps

Magic Jammer x2

Magic Cylinder x1

Widespread Ruin x1

Skull Dice x1

Mirror Force x1

Ring of Destruction x1

Answer 1

No man, I like it.  I think itd be very effective.  Does it work?  Seems like youd do well with it, but if you're not, the only suggestion I have would be to switch up your traps a little.  I like a good combo of Traps.  BTW Mirror Force is awesome, people under use that one.

Answer 2

This deck needs a lot of work. If you want a competitive deck i suggest you go to these sites: metagame.com and yugioh.tcgplayer.com. or even check youtube.com Unfortunately if you played even a little  beginner with cards released from these two-three years you would probably lose.

This deck looks like it was from 5 years ago. cmon 7 colored fish, axe of despair (great beatdown deck card), fairy meteor crush, man-eater bug? lol old cards. A strong level 4 monster with 2000 ATK is Gene-Warped Warwolf, try getting maybe 2 copies. Ring of Destruction is banned so is Graceful Charity, take out your "Dice" cards. I understand what you are doing with Maha Vailo, but i don't like it.. Keep Heavy Storm, SORL, MST, Premature Burial, Fissure, Mirror Force, maybe 1 of Magic Jammer. Definitely get Monster Reborn.

Okay so you have a beatdown deck, but all you got are stats. There tons of beatsticks with great effects which you need to put in. Lets say Jinzo, one tribute for 2400 ATK and stops traps. DMOC or dark magician of chaos, two tributes for a 2800 ATK and you get a spell card back from your graveyard. Last example- Dark Armed Dragon.. nuff said. If i were you i would get rid of all my monsters except for Morphing Jar.