How is my assignment? would be nice if u could help me & tell me wat will make it bettere :}?

Question

its quite a small assignment but its weighs in quite high

all suggestions apreciated :]

Akira Isogawa is a famous Australian costume designer, he fashioned noticeable costumes that looked interesting and unique. He did this by putting together very fine thread to singlet, tops and briefs. He also attached studs to a wide leather belt.

His clothes are famously sold around the world and nationally in Australia. Some of his designs were inspired by the Japanese culture and his experiences growing up in Japan; one of the fashion capitals.

This is one of his quotes “The number of hours someone has spent on manual work like this makes it priceless.”

This comes to show that he believes that quality is more important than quantity, something we could all benefit from.

Answer 1

A aided graphic should be better. Some figures or example of magazine will make your assignment interesting.