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How is my poem? Critique it honestly!?

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Into his open arms,

I am falling too fast.

A comforting smile,

And I'm wrapped up again.

The warmth of his kiss,

The grip of his hand,

Holding on mine,

As we look to the sky.

The stars are rewarding,

Like they were meant just for us.

How did this happen?

Since when aren't I scared?

A comforting smile,

I'm wrapped up again,

In his closing arms,

Have I fallen this hard?

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  1. That's beautiful. Makes me all warm.


  2. "since when aren't i scared"

    i think you will have to look at that again ,its just reads terribly and needs more thought

  3. It's good.

  4. warm and fuzzy

  5. nice one...

    please answer mine:

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

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