How is my poem (It's a christian poem)?

Question

What do you guys think of my poem? I just kind of wrote this before I fell asleep and I don't know what to do editing wise (I'm a terrible editor) and so yeah...and I am 13 so umm. also, as previously said this is a christian poem if that isn't clear enough. So anything to edit it and opinions...

Your beautiful soul is cracked and dark

You scream in pain and sorrow

You hate it all

You want to die

But all is well my child

For I am here

You kick and scream to defy

You slash and bleed

While you cry

You must escape from those stares

And you hide away in your place

But all is well my child

For I am here

I guide you through the thorns

You weep in joy and in guilt

You think my love will fade

Rid your fear my child

For I am here

Answer 1

i like it

Answer 2

awww i think its perfect!

Answer 3

why write about a made up religion?