How is my poem?....?

Question

I was trying to sleep when this came into my head, its about my best friend moving.

I give you one last kiss

To hold forever more

Blown to you from far away

It will reach you, im sure

To Hold and cherish

To keep you safe and warm

protect you from all harm

?????

So take this last kiss

hold it close

the last link you have to me

and im not done yet but what do you think so far?

Answer 1

I like it, youre a romantic 2

what is ariel movement?

answer this?

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Answer 2

it's kind of average, like you're trying to be deep, but you werent really thinking as deep as you could. go over it again. the idea is good, u just need to find the right words to explain.good luck:)

Answer 3

Great job, you should really submit it to http://www.papertank.com and see what they think.

I bet you could get a high rating for it on there!