How is this Partenza Represa? Is it okay?

Question

"Paper with Burnt Edges" - Partenza Repressa

I'm writing this note just to say,

to say the words so long unsaid,

so long unsaid before today,

before today falls far away.

I couldn't say it face to face,

face to face the words are hollow,

are hollow lacking any trace,

any trace of my heartbeat's race.

It seems no matter how I try,

how I try to tell you the truth,

the truth--to love you is to die.

To love you is to die, good-bye.

I'm writing this note just to say,

to say the words so long unsaid.

So long unsaid, I love you still,

You still have my heart, always will.

Answer 1

The poem sing songs and echos it's refrain, and tells a clear tale.

Kudos

Answer 2

Partenza Represa today.

Limerick yesterday.

My heart is over joyed.

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Answer 3

Very sweet,very felt and sad. I like it.

Answer 4

Another beautiful Partenza Represa from you! Love the title, it helps set the image throughout the poem.

Answer 5

I love this.  It is a wonderful poem; the style is new to me, but I find it graceful as it dances across the words, twirls and drops me to the next refrain.

I do not know the Partenza Represa, but this is a wonderful poem and if it meets the requirements it is superb.  If it doesn't meet the requirements, it is still superb.

T.

Answer 6

This is done right. My compliments.

Answer 7

Soft, sweet, and eloquent--like the feathered quill pen. This could have been a poetic letter denouncing our relationship and it would have left me okay with it. I wish my Dentist had that voice.

Answer 8

I am happy to see the Poets working on a classical form today. I was getting a bit tired of Limericks.

Answer 9

You've given the Partenza Represa a beautiful voice of love and longing.  I love it :)

Answer 10

Fantastic! I just discovered these a few minutes ago.

It looks like it could be a very fun form and challenging at the same time.

Answer 11

By itself it's fun to read; the repetition at the start of a line of a phrase from the preceding line has its charm, stately and serious at times--informal and light at others, and it clearly gives the poet a chance to show his or her skills. Overall, I like it and am glad you posted it for us to read. But a steady diet of poems with such a structure would, I fear, become less than delightful. Thanks again for sharing the poem and for introducing me to the Partenza Repressa, a structure I was not previously aware of.