How is this poem? Any suggestions for improvement?

Question

It's not yet time

to see you again,

to hear your voice-

I could call out

for you,

And you would hear me

in the darkness,

feel me as I fumble about

seeking your skin,

but I know

the midnight hour

has not yet called

with it's resounding

chime, its dark toll.

Today has not yet

threaded into tomorrow-

the dusk

has just settled into

this carpet,

thick and lush,

of my night.

I'll tend this garden

Of Trilliums

and Gardenia

alone, by the light

of the moon

until at length,

the dawn pierces me

and you see me

whole,

the way I want

your eyes to see me.

Answer 1

thats so beautiful! and i think its trilliums

Answer 2

-carpet? (reason:not very sensual word)

-feel me as i seek your skin? are you touching or not

-good theme though

Answer 3

it's like one big line of thoughts....it wasn't constructed in proper stanzas (yes i know not all poetry is written in stanza form) The rhyme scheme was all over the place, it wasn't overly impressive structure wise, but the emotion was there. Not a bad effort.