How is this story going so far?

Question

The story is about a girl named Nicole who moves to a town in New York and has to adapt to all of these different changes there. Im aiming it to be a romance novel, with a bit of jealousy.

What did you think?

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Answer 1

I could not access it without signing up with my space, which I would rather not do.

\I would suggest that you take it to your English teacher for critique, if you are of school age, or finish it, and submit it to a publisher or two, if you are not.