How should I link these 2 ideas together flowingly in my essay?

Question

so im writing an essay on why I should be a part a Chamber Music Program, and Ive started off with a introduction that goes like, "what is music?" and ive given some unique responses.

So now moving on to the second main paragraph, how should I link my first paragraph's topic to an idea that mainly tells the reader why i should be really joining this chamber program.

sound sort of weird, but hey, im open to any good suggestions from you guys!

Thanks!!! :)

Answer 1

Well as a writer, it is hard for me to suggest how to help your essay flow without seeing a draft of what you have written.  You said you have a unique response to the question "what is music" - maybe you could then continue into the next paragraph on why your unique perspective on what music is would make you a good candidate for the music program - how does it influence you as a player and so forth.

If you would like, you can email me what your first paragraph is and I can take a look at it - I've tutored writing.  I might be able to give you some more ideas if I could see your first paragraph.

I hope this is helpful - email me if there is anything else I can do! :)