How should I rewrite this sentence?

Question

1) Throughout history many acts of superiority and prejudice has emerged repeatedly.

I'm thinking the "superiority and prejudice" part doesn't sound right..

2) Relationships between the community and Hazaras and women were very fragile in Afghanistan resulting in many problems.

I mean the relationships between the whole community and the (Hazaras & women).

Answer 1

ur rite, this sentence is mesed up.

how about;

In the era of time complete, an attitude combined of superiority and prejudice have appeared again and again.

Because of fragile relationships between the Hazaras, their women; and the community, in Afganistan, there are many problems.

Answer 2

1. have instead of has

2.i dont know wat hazaras are and stuff but it sounds like too many ands...which resulted in many problems

Answer 3

Dont

Answer 4

1) Prejudice and dominance emerge repeatedly throughout history.

This makes it the active voice and give it more power.

2) In Afganistan relationships among the community, Hazaras and women were extremely fragile ensuing many problems.

Since you are talking about these 3 groups of people between is not proper grammar.

Answer 5

1) Many acts of prejudice have emerged repeatedly throughout history under the guise of a so called superior race.

2) Fragile community relations in Afghanistan between (blank and blank) have resulted in (name the problems).

*Does the community have women? Do the Hazaras have women? Are women from both the community and the Hazaras fighting? You must answer these questions before filling in (blank and blank).  

*What are their problems with each other? You must answer this question before filling in (name the problems).  

Answer 6

Here we go...

Your first sentence is fine as long as you change "has" to "have"

For the second one, I suggest something like:

In Afghanistan, the community had a fragile relationship with the Hazaras and women, resulting in many problems.

Play around with it untill you think it sounds good to you.

Answer 7

1) many acts .... have emerged :)

2) The attitude of the community towards Hazaras and women were very complex (fragile)

Answer 8

It's right, just change the "has" to "have"

Throughout history many acts of superiority and prejudice have emerged repeatedly.

The second one has too many "and"s

Relationships between the community, Hazaras, and women were very fragile in Afghanistan resulting in many problems.  

Answer 9

1) Throughout history acts of prejudice and it's accompanying superiority have repeatedly emerged.

(2) The Hazaras and women in Afghanistan had a fragile relationship that was the cause of many problems.  

Answer 10

Superiority fueled by hatred has repeatedly emerged throughout history.

Many problems stemmed from the underlying tension between the community and Hazaras women in Afghanistan.