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How should i close this paragraph?

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I'm suppose to write a paragraph, 7 sentences or more so what do you think I should write for the closing. I left out the names and cities for security reasons. Anything I should fix?

There are a lot of things that I want Mrs. *name left out* to know about me. For starters, my parents are from *city left out*, NOT *city left out*. I want to travel the world someday, maybe during summer when I have more time. I have always been interested in learning about different cultures. In my spare time I like do something other than just sit around and watch T.V. so if my parents aren’t up for going out somewhere, I bake. I’m not sure what career I want to pursue but I would like to do something to help people. I don’t like making decisions when I don’t have to so sometimes I may be a bit indecisive. I have tried many different sports but for now I want to stick to tennis because I really enjoy it and I’m not that bad either. Hopefully I may get into the Olympics when I old enough. Also, unlike most students, I love to read so my parents don't have a problem getting me to do my required 30 minute reading.

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  1. You want to add your 'essence' in there. If you are an up beat person, add something funny or cheery in there, like (You can use this, I dont care.) 'Look at it this way. When i'm a famous olympian, you wont have to get my autograph if you save my papers!' (Im assuming this is one of those student survies...) It's kinda lame,yes, but the idea is still there.  

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