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How this poem?

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i see your face in my mind

like pieces of glitter you slip past me

the teacher is babbling about something to do with maths

i know only basic maths that me + you = happy

but i didnt notice the man u couldnt take your eyes off

his fantastic muscular body

and my beastlyness

my uglyness so horrific u cringed at the first touch

your beauty would radiate me

now it only leaves it drawn and in need of you

i desire to just touch you 1 last time

before you had left

before i found the note saying why you left

but you can forever know

i love you

3 simple words

thrown around remorselessly

and yet so true

so i plant a final kiss upon your picture

leave a note on the bedside along with your present from my birthday

and now i fear pain at what i am about to do

a voice in my head tells me move on

ignore you but i cannot

love has driven me SO close to you

and yet i can never have you

the knife cuts my skin slowly

i watch my blood flow freely

and as blackness fills me i c you.

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  1. Incredible, the emotional build up was flawless. I love this poem!


  2. alsome
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