How to Kill Edward Cullen?

Question

So this is a fanfiction question. I would ask if sounds like a stupid way to kill Edward Cullen. I'm still using the idea so nobody take it please.

So this is how it is basically going to go down. I'm current writing a Team Jacob fanfiction (@chapter8) which is post Eclipse. Bella and Edward get married, Bella changes, and Jane comes back for Bella. And Bella (being a very strong newborn) shoves Edward hard in the chest to get him away from Jane. He flies hard, she kills Jane, only to find out that she had jump start Edward's heart, turning him human. Jacob is there continuing to give Edward life support. You see Edward with green eyes crying, listen to his heart. He exchanges some sappy words with Bella before the corrupt venom in his body consumes and stops his heart killing him for real.

Be truthful, would this make you as a reader cry? I want to know what you all think.

Answer 1

I would read it

and i might cry >.>

Answer 2

ok it wouldnt make me cry cuz im a jacob fan

also, if it was that easy to turn a vampire into a human then there it would have been found out and pretty much all vampires would not be there anymore

but its pretty cool still, maybe u should write a book on a different topic (making up ur own rules)

Answer 3

no.

i love edward.

hate jacob

she couldnt kill him but beinh hit into a wall

a vamprie can only die by being burnt.

they also cant chanhe back

Answer 4

Im team Edward. Why would I want him to die... but yes, to answer your question it would make me cry.

Answer 5

This would definitely make a huge Edward fan cry:(

Answer 6

First off, from your description, when did Edward get the venom in his body?

Back to the question, anything can make a reader cry, but not all readers will cry. I'm guessing your goal is to make as many readers feel "emotional" as possible (not that that's a bad thing). It all depends on how you write it. It sounds like you've got a good idea going, but it'll really hit off if you put enough details in it to give the reader something to be upset about. Best of luck with your writing!

Answer 7

Sure!!

Why not? I once read an epic Team Jacob fic. Bella turned back to human. And it seemed pretty realistic.

I like it. It sounds sad...and if it was well written, it would make me cry. At the least, feel emotional...and that's the point, right? Evoking emotion out of readers?

Just a little tuning heere and there and it should be pretty good =)

Good luck!

Answer 8

I would definitely read it, and maybe cry.

As long as the scene and feelings were described well.

I like the idea, it sounds awesome!

Answer 9

Ha ha, I like it, I think I might cry (probably not, because I don't like him) if Edward died. It sounds good though :) I'd read it if it was a book, or a more detailed fan fiction thingy...

Answer 10

no, and it doesn't really make sense.....

i heart edward cullen!

Answer 11

umm. that would be awesome but no it wouldnt make me cry.

Answer 12

No, I would jump for joy because Eddiekins is dead. Although it wouldn't make sense in terms of, well, logic. But when has Meyer danced with logic? If he did turn human, he would have, what, animal blood in his veins and die instantly. Or something, I'm no scientist.

It's still better than 'Renesmee' any day of the week, though!

Answer 13

Lol i thought you were a twilight hater when i read this question!

Well. I like the idea, but it's not really possible - but what the heck, it's a fanfic, anything can happen!

And yes, i probably would cry.

Answer 14

No, fan fiction rarely makes me cry. It all sounds too sappy.

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