In the aim of the draft of my river field report, I wrote:
"The purpose of this study was to study the PSO River profile at the specified site locations in Map 1, to see whether it conforms to a classic river profile and its respective characteristics."
My teacher added the comments;
Where is the river?
How big is it?
For where is it do I just say "the PSO river profile within the New Territories, HH Bay"?
And for how "big" is it, how do you describe the size of a river?
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