How will you describe a bird catching a fish from a lake?

Question

Could you say it in a vivid way?

Answer 1

Step by rigid, graceful step, the hoary headed heron skims the silty waters. Hardly a change to his gait, yet with a swooping jab of his piercing bill a writhing fish is caught in its immanent death.

Answer 2

As the eagle swooped down from the sky, slicing through the water as water sprayed off the surface and came soaring back up with proudly displaying a fish in it's razor sharp beak.