How would u rate this story ? I read it yesterday, cant form an opinion?

Question

It;s written by Erin Soros. How would rate it out of 100 ?

We called him Moon and Eight Ball and Pinball, his head so bald and shining that no name would

stick.

You remember Moon. He'd come to the BC coast with plans to make enough money to buy a

house. Moon was one of the hardest working chokermen this camp had seen. The other loggers

marveled at how much his head would sweat when he worked. His baldness stuck out of his

blanket when he slept and we'd take a bit of charcoal to decorate it with a smiling face. When the

steam donkey rolled over to crush him, all that had escaped was his bald head and it was

screaming. Moon's body was under the machine. He had fallen into a depression in the ground, a

natural grave that was deep enough to keep him from dying but not deep enough to keep him

alive.

Answer 1

So where did you read this?It reminded me a lot of Stephen King style of writing.I would rate it 70.It was not a pleasant story ,but it held my interest to the end.

Answer 2

Frustrating to say the least. Good story line. I must obtain a copy (7)

Answer 3

6