How would you characterize my poem?

Question

I will say, my Adonai is "my refuge and my fortress," in

Him will I trust,

"Who am I," I say, "but a made of dust."

However, Adonai created me in His image, in His likeness, as

My desire,

His beautiful hair like white wool, His eloquent skin like bronze

And His great eyes like blazing fire.

So, come, my One True Love, Adonai, speak to me face to face

As if I were Moses,

And let the four winds of heaven blow up to You my sweet

Smelling aromas and one million red roses.

Title: "for love of Adonai"

Thank you

Answer 1

Adonai - one of God's name Judaism

I can say that your poem is an ode to Adonai. It seems, the way you write it, it is lyrical.

I love it!

Answer 2

It seems like you really have love for your Adonai.