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How would you rate this poem on a scale from one to ten?

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if there is anything wrong with it please tell me

You are the world to me

Reason why i wake up

Why I smile

Why I’m happy

My heartbeats only for you

I’ve never been happy than I am with you

I fill with joy when I hear your voice

Nothing is more beautiful than your smiling face

I have never loved anything as much as I love you

My heart is about to bursting with my love for you

You are my world

You are my love

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  1. there is constant grammatical error.  and it doesn't flow particularly well.. other than that it isn't bad..

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