How would you rate this poem?

Question

I wrote this ballad in 8th grade

its about the discrimination of Jews and the Frank family

Jews were happy, alive, and free

Then n***s came and took everything away

We lost our right to achieve an education

They wanted to make the poor Jews pay

We lose our families, homes, and friends

This is like a circle that never ends

Or hope and faith are torn to shreds

I am forced to run and hide

Will I ever see the sun again?

Or feel the calm oceans tide?

We lose our families, homes, and friends

This is like a circle that never ends

Not knowing if I will live to see tomorrow

I am locked in this tower of shame and fears

Death and n***s turn my dreams into nightmares

Alone, I sit to shed my tears

We lose our families, homes, and friends

This is like a circle that never ends

I had my hopes, I had my dreams

Now all I have are memories, and sorrow

I lost all that was dear to me

They may even kill me tomorrow

We lose our families, homes, and friends

This is like a circle that never ends

Answer 1

for writing about misery you get a 10\10

but I dint think Ann was a pessimist otherwise she would have never bothered writing a diary so over all 5\10 needed a little more spirit and good faith and sounded like a nursery rhyme but its cool

Answer 2

Wow! that's an amazing poem, how did you do it, where did you get the idea to make a poem so horrible that it's actualy interesting.