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Sweet Dreams in a Nightmare.

The phone rang unusually early,

woke me up from sweet dreams in a nightmare,

Unusual sadness deepens,

together with the wound in our hearts.

The sky wept as we head to the home of big birds,

the color of dawn was as dark as our moods.

Emotional faces can be seen,

but emotional hearts were too difficult to measure.

Best friends and freaky fan,

different but yet the same.

Tears of joy, tears of sorrow,

tears of misses, with us always.

Tears of joy, tears of sorrow,

tears of memory, with us always.

Tears began to flow when the clock strucks nine,

and good luck is what we wished for.

I still couldn't believe you were leaving,

until you reached the gate, separated by glass railings and securities.

Right there the officers in between,

the airport has once again become my grave of happiness.

A book with no last page,

A movie with no credits,

A game with no referee,

My second and my last.

Best wishes from everyone.

Rate 1(Poor) - 10(Excellent)

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  1. Awesome dude, is it a Michael Jackson song?

    7/10


  2. Best friends and freaky fan,

    different but yet the same....yea 9 ...

  3. excellent but 8 out of 10

  4. XX

    over 21 only....

  5. awesome, judging from the lyrics alone with no tune

    i give it a 7.5 out of 10

    Great Job =D

  6. reading this confused me... is this suppose to be happy? or sad?

    i rate it 10 ... heheh for successfully confuse me  

  7. I proudly give u 9... Or maybe 10...  

  8. 10.5

    original and superb!

  9. 10!  it shows a lot of emotion and sounds like it is a story.  congratulations.  it also has a lot of flow and it speaks to me of sorrow.

  10. ni hao chong ming o...

    i give you 10!

  11. tHAt like toally rOCKS dUde!!!

    11 OUt of 10

  12. yeah.. thats cool.. i give u 10...

    i am not qualified to judge u.. but i know u loves ur writings..

  13. ah... not too bad. This is a song or poem? I give it a...

    7

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