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A Sense of Achievement is Very Important
I have taken part in International Marathon three times. I finished the first two within the set time, but I failed in the third one. Why? When I ran the first two, there was a road sign every kilometer, telling me how many kilometers I had covered. So I got a sense of achievement whenever I saw the road sign, more than forty times all the way. But when I ran my third marathon, there was only one road sign every ten kilometers, so I only got a sense of achievement four times. A marathon is a long long way. Only with a lasting sense of achievement can you persist to the end. Without a lasting sense of achievement, you give up very easily.
It is the same with learning English. Learning English is like a marathon. It takes years of hard work to speak good English. So you must do what you can to get a sense of achievement whenever you learn English; otherwise, you’ll give up easily. How do you find a sense of achievement when learning English? Just learn the English relating to what you say in your own life and what you think in your own mind.
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