I wrote this last night. I wanted some opinions. thank you.
Also, tell me what you think its about.
She smiles just to hide the tears
The ones streaming down her face
She lies just to make everything seem, okay.
She's dying inside
As she desperately hides
Her feelings are kept away.
He can't seem to help her now
he's hopeless and wonders how
The one he loved got so sick and now
There's no where to run son.
She's lost all direction.
There's no way to save her from
The darkness she has become.
And through all the days
He wishes this was a dream
A fairytale locked away
An ending that had a good name
He fell down so hard
He knew she'd be so proud
Of everything he endowed
For her, his only child
The clock ticks ten and goes
Her sadness builds and shows
Through her sparkling eyes
With every tear she cried
He'd beat himself down,
yell a lot louder,
wished he'd come home.
to let her know she wasn't alone.
He's right there beside her
The breathing gets louder
The words come out faster
And now the end has come to say
that she was
that she is
and always will be
his only child.
Tags: