Hows these lyrics kinda old but whatever?

Question

just some **** old from back when this war **** started not that great but whatever. tryna make something with meaning not cash cars clothes cuz i aint got none of that.

Meet zack 3 months old

his fathers goin off to fight in this useless war.

Heres Hula, yeah hes only 6 years old

but hes afraid to poke his head out the window

gun shots goin off

bullets whizzing by

damm hes only 6 years old

why the president want him to die

knock at the door is it the devil comming to cry

nope its them troops\

with there helmets and boots

and they coming for his father

(if the door door isnt answered your whole family will be murdered)

his father looks at his son

with a tear in his eye

tells him be strong

brighter days will soon arive

a kick to the door

the lights blacked out

and bullets flew in the house

dammm

Answer 1

What's your question?????????

Answer 2

this reminds me of that old eminem and dre song

Answer 3

umm...I don't know what to say... Learn how to write bars so we can better understand the rhyme scheme.  But from the looks of things it's not that good.  Not tryna be ignorant or nothing.