Hows this for a poem?

Question

in the endless darkness

the past finds peace

in broken sunlight we find release

after dusk the blackness gathers

before the dawn nothing matters

seek the star steady in in the cold

find the light the future you hold

Answer 1

BRAVO....I can't do poems for nothing.

This one sounds really really good.

:)

Answer 2

it doesn't make sence what are you talking about?

Answer 3

it's ok

Answer 4

Not bad.

Answer 5

simply amazing. and for the person who said it doesn't make any sense.. they abviously do not have the compasity to deeply and fully inderstand the meaning behind your words. you have read them and let yourself take you to the place in which the words were created from. with your poem it was so easy to do. i can not describe the feeling i felt while reading this. bravo is farthest away from and understatment there is.