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Hows this poem? and what does it make you feel?tips?

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im 14 i wrote this 2/25/08

tell me what you think

The World

The World is all as it should be

When it is just you and me

When I am by the river side

I am never better inside

The World is at its best

When I am in the forest

When I am beneath the biggest tree

I am never mor happy

The World is my favorite place

When I am in the mountians white lace

In that jungle of rock and snow

My heart has a warmer glow

But the most amazing thing

Is that theres another thing

That place where all are dear

The place where friends and family grow near

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  1. like the last three lines of the third stanza.

    ghost.


  2. I like it it makes me feel that the earth is our home and we should apriciate its beauty and without it our family would never be here. im not sure if this is what it is suppose to mean but that is what it makes me feel lol :-)

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