I'd like to submit a poem. Is that okay?

Question

Life is so strange--so very strange. How did it all come to be?

Three decades have passed

I'm an adult at last and yet I'm inclined to agree

that maybe it's better to be like a child and live in a world of your own--that's happy and good ,--if only could, then I would not feel so alone.

G

Answer 1

umm ya it is in poetry

your poem is confusing

it does rhyme though

keep working on it I am sure it will get better! ")

Would you please look at my poem I need feedback thanks

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Answer 2

i really don't think so.  this is for people who are seriuos about losing weight

Answer 3

No good, good free verse requires a hopeless lack of talent while talent you appear to have in abundance.

Answer 4

I am going to pull my hair out of my head . . . your poem RHYMES!  STOP IT NOW!