I'd like you to read another poem, please? :O)?

Question

I LIE ON THE FLOOR SO DEAD AND BROKEN

DREAMING OF A WAY I CAN FIND TO OPEN

OPEN MY ARMS AND CLOSE DOWN MY BRAIN

I FEEL I AM SLOWLY GOING INSANE.

I LIE ON THIS FLOOR OF SHATTERED GLASS

ONLY HOPING THAT THESE FEELINGS WILL PASS

I SEE YOU SITTING NEXT TO ME

BLEEDING FROM DESTRUCTION I MADE YOU SEE

I LIE IN A POOL OF MIXED BLOOD

TEARS FALLING A DESTROYING FLOOD

WASHING AWAY ALL HEARTACHE AND DOUBT

AS YOU PICK ME UP AND CARRY ME OUT

SMALL WHISPERS OF LOVE AND UNDERSTANDING

OPEN MY EYES TO JUST WHERE YOU’RE STANDING

COMPLETE AND UTTER CHAOS CONSUMED

LEFT NOTHING BUT LILLIES TO BE BLOOMED

I UNDERSTAND JUST WHERE I BELONG

I SEE MYSELF AS NOTHING BUT STRONG

I WRAP MY THOUGHTS AROUND MY THRILL

AND ONLY REALIZE I CAN FULFILL.

Answer 1

I can see your poem is very powerful and tragic!  Great one! Keep it up!

Answer 2

may your thoughts and integrity allways be fullfilled with the bounty of a sharpend pencil

Answer 3

Um...WOW!!! That is one of my favorite poems...I really really like it!! If you wrote that...good job!!