I'm 13 and I wanted to know if I'm a good poet or not? Here's my first poem i wrote?

Question

I love you in ways that words can't express.

I imagine the your eyes filled with love as you look down into my face and I imagine the warmth of your touch.

I imagine laying in your arms and feeling safe for the very first time.

I imagine our first date walking through the park holding hands and being as close to each other as possible. I imagine dancing in the park by a pond and then we start to get tired.

I imagine the willow tree we will lay under while I rest my head upon your shoulder as you sing to me with an angelic voice so soothing and lovely that any person would forget to breathe thinking it's impossible you're still on earth.I imagine our first kiss so pationate and so beautiful that even an angel from heaven could not believe it was real.

I imagine a love that could be but will never be. As to you I am as small and weak as page number in a book. Without me you could loose your place and never find it without having to read it all again and again searching for your place.

I imagine true Love.

Answer 1

I think that poem is very nice. I am not sure of the style of the poem. But what is important about poetry is the feeling one gets from a poem. Your poem has a good feeling about it. And it does reflect your innocence which is very refreshing.

It makes me remember a time of imagination and romanticizing the thought and feeling of being love.

YOU did a WONDERFUL!  Don't ever stop writing!!!

Answer 2

That was wonderfull! Your a Star!!!

Answer 3

This is great. And you're just 13, so you can practice more. If this is what you want to do when you get older, you're just in time. :)

Answer 4

I love you in a way words can't express

I imagine you staring into my eyes with love.

I imagine the warmth of your touch

I imagine our first date, hand in hand, so close...

I imagine the willow tree we lay under,

As i rest my head upon your shoulder

As you sing to me with a breathtaking voice,

So soothing

So lovely,

It brings me to life

I imagine our first kiss,

So passionate

So beautiful,

That is seemed so surreal

I wish for a love, that will never be.

As for you, im only a page number in a book.

But Without me, you could loose your place

And never find it without reading over again

Searching for your place

I imagine...

True love

Anyway, WOW i love it, its stunning. But i think i made a few adjustments, that you might ocnsider when structuring it. I hope it helps...and i love the poem by the way, its so sweet and beautiful, reminds me of my first boyfriend

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Answer 5

WOW !!! Love it. Good job for only being 13. You have a furture in writing. GOOD LUCK

Answer 6

hmm..i must say..u got skills sissy...keep it up..i bet u r gonna b a very gud poet within next 5 years. at this age wut u wrote is more than enuf.carry on..

Answer 7

wow some1 my age well for a young poet pretty good almost advanced im more of a writer but that was fantabulous

Answer 8

its was alright, somewhat cliche but with more practice you could be great.

Answer 9

its better than anything i could ever write at that age..

i think its good.

Answer 10

I think it's very powerful. I especially like the analogy about the page number.

Answer 11

It's a great start. I like it!=]

♥

Answer 12

This poem is beautiful

it is about love

The final line on the poem can be dandy title for it( I imagine true love )

because there is I imagine at the beginning of each line in the poem.

it talks about warmth, facing each other ( eye contact )

the feeling safe in the arms of him.

places you two would be

and the first date

just one tiny spelling error

pastionate

correct

passionate

other wise beautiful