What do you think? I think I can make it work, but is it even good enough? I just wrote it this week, and its short, so easy to memorize for my first time. What is your suggestion?
In a Garden Among the Dead
Our love was a fallacy
Burried lies and
Burried lives
In a garden among the dead
The false flowers are stark
Against your granite grave
The freshly carved words
Mark your life and death
In a garden among the dead
Our unreal love rings true
The bell tolls as a wedding is through
And the widow stands alone
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