I'm in 8th Grade and have a problem with Essays. My papers sound like a second grader wrote it. Help!?

Question

I'm in 8th Grade and have a problem with Essays. My papers sound like a second grader wrote it. Help!?

Answer 1

Use bigger words and don't use choppy sentences.

Something one of my high school english teachers did was he'd make everybody make a sentence variety page (where you had to count the number of words in each sentence). This might help you make it sound like an 8th grader wrote it.

Also see your english teacher. They might be able to give you a few tips.

Answer 2

Copy your paper and email it to [e-mail].

I'll revise it for you.

Answer 3

Work on improving your vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, try to elaborate on your ideas and explain them thoroughly. Without seeing a sample of your writing, all I can give you is those general tips. Good luck

Answer 4

How are we supposed to help you, if you've given no specifics on what your papers are like?