Once again. My myspace address for a business myspace i created is www.myspace.com/discoverytutoring
If you could please look at this, it is for a tutoring company and tell me what you think. Are there any errors? Would this capture your attention?
There were some issues brought up. I have since take my number off the site and added additional ways to contact me. Also I believe i have corrected all the grammer. As of my age being listed as 17, I am 17, almost 18, on myspace you MUST have your age displayed, this is determined by what birthday you put in. As of listing my qualifications, not every student will have me as a tutor, I have several tutors hired, I cannot list qualifications of myself without the parents having in mind that I will be the one tutoring. Thank you for your time and thoughts.
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