I'm studying English as a second language.please help me out?

Question

I'm studying English as a second language.please help me out.

If I wrote wrong sentences, Please let me now how can I correct them.

p.29

-When I woke up, It was already at noon.

-My older sister came home after school.

-My father, meanwhile, was ready to have a lunch.

-I woke up at noon. and then, I read the book. After reading the book, I had a lunch,

-30.

-The comb is into the mug.

-He will see the book shelf that has many books on the right. And, he will see the desk on straight ahead. But, he won't be able to see anything on the left. Because nothing is located on the left.

p.31

-There is the beauty salon on the 3rd floor. And, there is the gymnasium on the 2nd floor. Finally, there are two landry and the butcher on the 1st floor.

p.32

-There are three stairs that are made of stones in this dungeon. Also, there are a lot of bats on the ceiling of this dungeon.

If he go up the stair that is on the right, he will see many kinds of small bugs and weapons.

But If he choose the stair in the middle, he will see five statues and many skeletons.

If he choose the stairs on the left, he won't be able to see anything because there's no object in here.

He may think this dungeon is quite deep, dark and creepy enough.

p.33

-The new rollercoaster is opend on this Saturday in the green park.

More than 50 people can get a chance to ride it on this Friday.

Every people can apply this project. Many people will be involved in this project, and they will rate the new rollercoaster. Check out our web site and apply the project if you want.

p.34

-I think there should be an after-school nature club in our school. There are several good reasons for it. First, Today, It is almost impossible for most children to see and feel natures in the city. Second, It will help us study science seeing and feeling nature. And, Fianlly, All of us want to learn about animals and plants. I'm sure this club will be valuable for many reasons.

p.35

-almost the same color inside.

p.36

-The christmas present written by O.Henry and The black cat written by Edgar Allen poe are the American Literatures.

-Feeling after reading.

p.39

-A tree on the left is taller than a right one.

thank you so much.

Answer 1

"p.29

-When I woke up, It was already at noon."

You don't need the 'at'. It's fine if you just write "When I woke up, it was already noon."

"p.29

-My father, meanwhile, was ready to have a lunch."

You don't the 'a' in front of lunch. It's simply "My father, meanwhile, was ready to have lunch."

"p.29

-I woke up at noon. and then, I read the book. After reading the book, I had a lunch,"

Again, you don't need the 'a' in front of lunch. And at the end it is a period (.) not a comma (,)

"-30.

-The comb is into the mug."

The word 'into' should be replaced with 'in'.

"-30.

-He will see the book shelf that has many books on the right. And, he will see the desk on straight ahead. But, he won't be able to see anything on the left. Because nothing is located on the left."

It should be just '.... will see the desk straight ahead.... " the word 'on' is not needed.

"p.31

-There is the beauty salon on the 3rd floor. And, there is the gymnasium on the 2nd floor. Finally, there are two landry and the butcher on the 1st floor."

When you say "two landry" you spelled 'laundry' wrong, and there should be the word 'rooms' afterwards. So 'two laundry rooms'.

"pg.32

If he go up the stair that is on the right, he will see many kinds of small bugs and weapons.

But If he choose the stair in the middle, he will see five statues and many skeletons.

If he choose the stairs on the left, he won't be able to see anything because there's no object in here."

Everytime you use the word 'choose' in this section, it should actually be 'chooses'.

"p.33

-The new rollercoaster is opend on this Saturday in the green park."

When you put 'opend' (which I think you mean 'opened') it should be the future-tense version, so it should be 'opening'. Also, you do not need the 'on' in front of 'this Saturday.'

"p.33

More than 50 people can get a chance to ride it on this Friday."

Again, you don't need to put 'on' in front of 'this Friday'.

"p.33

Every people can apply this project. Many people will be involved in this project, and they will rate the new rollercoaster. Check out our web site and apply the project if you want."

When you wrote 'every people' I think it would better if you wrote 'everyone'.

"p.34

-I think there should be an after-school nature club in our school. There are several good reasons for it. First, Today, It is almost impossible for most children to see and feel natures in the city. Second, It will help us study science seeing and feeling nature. And, Fianlly, All of us want to learn about animals and plants. I'm sure this club will be valuable for many reasons."

'Today' does not need to be capitalized, it is fine as just 'today'. 'Fianlly' is supposed to 'finally'

"p.36

-The christmas present written by O.Henry and The black cat written by Edgar Allen poe are the American Literatures."

When are wrote '... are the American Literatures ..." I think it would be better to write "are both American Literatures"

"p.36

-Feeling after reading."

I'm not sure what you mean? This doesn't make sense.

"p.39

-A tree on the left is taller than a right one."

It should be 'the tree' and 'the right one'. So replace 'a' with 'the'.

I hope I helped you, you did very well! What is your first language?

Answer 2

I'm sorry but you should do your homework yourself.  If you can't then you will never benefit from this great opportunity you have to learn.

Answer 3

p.29

-When I woke up, it was already noon.

-My older sister came home after school.

-My father, meanwhile, was ready to have lunch.

-I woke up at noon and then I read the book. After reading the book, I had lunch.

-30.

-The comb is into the mug. (This makes no sense)

-He will see the book shelf that has many books on the right. And, he will see the desk straight ahead. But, he won't be able to see anything on the left because nothing is located on the left.

p.31

-There is the beauty salon on the 3rd floor. And, there is the gymnasium on the 2nd floor. Finally, there are two laundromats and a butcher shop on the 1st floor.

p.32

-There are three stairs that are made of stone in this dungeon. Also, there are a lot of bats on the ceiling of this dungeon.

If he goes up the stairs on the right, he will see many kinds of small bugs and weapons.

But If he choose the stairs in the middle, he will see five statues and many skeletons.

If he choose the stairs on the left, he won't be able to see anything because there's nothing up there.

He may think this dungeon is quite deep, dark and creepy.

p.33

-The new rollercoaster, at the park, is open this Saturday.

More than 50 people get a chance to ride on it this Friday.

Everyone can join this project. Many people will be involved with this project, and they will rate the new rollercoaster. Check out our web site and join the project if you want.

p.34

-I think there should be an after-school nature club in our school. There are several good reasons for it. First,  it is almost impossible for most children to see and feel nature in the city. Second, it will help us study science by seeing and feeling nature. And, Finally, all of us want to learn about animals and plants. I'm sure this club will be valuable for many reasons.

p.35

-It is almost the same color inside.

p.36

-The Christmas Present, written by O.Henry and The Black Cat, written by Edgar Allen Poe are American Literatures.

-Feeling after reading. (What?)

p.39

-The tree on the left is taller than the one on the right.

Answer 4

-When I woke up, it was already noon.

-My older sister came home after school.

-My father, meanwhile, was ready to have lunch.

-I woke up at noon. After that I read a book. After reading the book, I had some lunch.

-30.

-The comb is in the mug.{Are you saying a brush is in the coffee cup..?}

-He will see the book shelf that has many books on the right. And, he will see the desk on straight ahead. But, he won't be able to see anything on the left. Because nothing is located on the left.

p.31

-There is the beauty salon on the 3rd floor. And, there is the gym on the 2nd floor. Finally, there are two landry rooms and the butcher on the 1st floor.

p.32

-There are three stairs that are made of stones in this dungeon. Also, there are a lot of bats on the ceiling of this dungeon.

If he were to go up the stair that is on the right, he will see many kinds of small bugs and weapons.

But If he will chose the stair in the middle, he will see five statues and many skeletons.

If he choose the stairs on the left, he would be lead to an emtpy space,because there's no object in here.

He may think this dungeon is quite deep, dark and creepy though.

p.33

-The new rollercoaster is open on this Saturday in the green park.

More than 50 people can get a chance to ride it on this Friday.

Every person can apply this project. Many people will be involved in this project, and they will rate the new rollercoaster. Check out our web site and apply the project if you want.

p.34

-I think there should be an after-school nature club in our school. There are several good reasons for it. First, today, it is almost impossible for most children to see and feel natures in the city. Second, it will help us study science seeing and feeling nature. And, finally, all of us want to learn about animals and plants. I'm sure this club will be valuable for many reasons.

p.35

-Its almost the same color inside.

p.36

-"The Christmas Present"written by O.Henry and "The Black Cat" written by Edgar Allen Poe are American literatures.

-How do i feel after reading?

p.39

-A tree on the left is taller then the one on the right one.