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You form the phrases of love.
Your words surge
With the undulating tides of your lips
And float to my ears
Where they rest for a fleeting moment
On the last breath of a dying day.
Your words are mine alone,
Transcending time
Until they filter down into my soul,
Making me whole again.
They fill me up,
Righting the void
Created by the distance
Between two hearts
And rise to claim their home
Amid the celestial perfection
Orbiting two hearts for eternity,
Emblazoning their grace
Upon heaven's gentle skyscape
To remind us of these moments
For all our lives.
They confess their hope
To remain bound to our hearts forever
As their smoldering embers
Bond us together,
Two star-cross'd lovers desperately trying
To untangle the web of constellations
That imprisons our emotions.
We'll escape
And search east of the sun
For the glimmer of hope
That arrives with each new day.
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