I've fallen, can I get up?

Question

The Falling

So many souls

With holes

Gaping shaping

Lives left so..

Write I do

About me & you

Visions lost with

Coins not tossed

Landing on the edge

Standing

Near the ledge ready

To leap with faith

That someone will catch

The falling

©rad 073108

Answer 1

The coin - standing on edge - reminded me of an Outer Limits (I think) story - as long as this coin was standing - the person who tossed it - had exceptionally good luck - once it fell over - the luck was gone. But as gamblers like to say "Lady Luck is fickle" ♥  

Answer 2

wow... what a heart-felt beautiful thing.. congratulations!

Answer 3

I do believe the arms are open all around.  This is beautifully written.  Thank you.

Answer 4

This is so heartfelt, so poignant.  It sounds beautiful read out loud. You have courage, as all do who are willing to make that "leap with faith". Thank you.

Answer 5

As you stand on the edge

of uncertainty,

There's something you should know.

With Life comes, no guarantee,

you must gamble as you go.

You may stand and Ponder,

For all the World to see,

Though only in your own Heart,

can you feel whats meant to be.

If by chance you ,

Take the Leap of courage

that you lack,

I'll Be there to catch you,

They'll be no going back.

Then as I hold you in my arms,

And all thats wrong is righted,

Together we will spread our Wings,

Forever More, United!

Answer 6

This is good street-beat outbursting. Well suited for performance...