Please tell me what you think of this poem:
He is my inspiration.
Derivation,
Of all my creations.
He is my inspiration .
Sensations,
Far past temptation.
He is my inspiration.
Frustrations,
Then back to love makin’.
He is my inspiration.
Admiration,
With no need for explanation.
He is my inspiration.
*Should it be longer? Is there anything I should change?
Thanks for all of your help!!!!!
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