I Need A Reviev Of My Page And My Advert Can You Help Me?

Question

OK can someone do an reviev for my page the internet oage is here yougamelive.page.tl

and the advert is here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSWwjVRIcXk plz do and rewiew of the both things for me thnx

Answer 1

The video is good but i would recommend using the same font for every line of text throughout the video. My prefered font would be the one you used for 'Updated 3 times a week'.

Webpage: Left hand menu - Coming only has 1 M (you spelt it with 2) and its Newsletter not Newslatter

Your 1st line of text :

Hi and Welcome to YouGameLive from now on you can get informet about all the new game that are out or will come soon like  Spore, The sims 3, ironman and many more (changes: lower case w in welcome, informed with d not t, game with s. Capitals on Sims and Ironman.

I won't go through the whole site but you should check it for spelling.

Answer 2

OK