I Need Some Advice On My Story I'm Writing?

Question

I'm writing a story about first love. A fifteen year old girl who falls in love with a young adult, but I can think of a way that they could meet. Any advice?

Answer 1

my advice ....... guy just want s*x with you......but if u really think he is the one or he is special.... go a head but made sure safety come first ... dun get pregnant you will get your life mess up coz u are young......

Answer 2

She is having trouble at school, drugs, parental problems, gets in trouble with the police etc She gets put into counselling , a young cousellor whom gives her comfort, direction, respect, and just an ear to hear her problems tingles her feelings for him. He realises this and slowly pulls away but comes to the conclusion its her health and lifestyle changes that need to be put first