I WROTE MY 1st LOVE POEM. please critique :)?

Question

This poem came to me when I tried this wild root drink. I know, Strange inspiration, Right? This is my first love poem so feel free to critique honestly!

The poison of love

When we kiss, your Ignorance will die

When we embrace, my heart will race

Every day we die, alone.

Every day we live, Together.

Answer 1

i like the balance between the last two lines

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pretty good for getting inspiration from a wild root drink