I Wrote This, Is It Good?

Question

DON'T BE TO HARD ON ME, PLEASE :]

To: Doug.

I still love you.

When you broke up with me, a part inside of me died. I just cant believe were over. I'll never get to kiss you again. You dont want me, and that hurts, because i still want you.

You were the best thing that has ever happened, i'm so afraid that i will never find someone as amazing as you were to me.

I would give anything to have one more day with you. To kiss you. To hold hands with. To hug. To Say " i love you ".

I miss the way you looked at me. I miss your lips against mine. I miss the way you texted me every night saying how much i meant to you. I miss your silly little nicknames for me. Baby I miss you.

I remember when you asked me out. I remember our first kiss. You were the only thing that mattered to me.

I hate that we dont talk. I hate that i probally meant nothing to you. I hate how you dont miss me.

I never got how people could love the person they hate. But i surely get it now.

You changed me. i will never be the person i was before i meant you.

Sometimes i want to die because you fill me with so much pain i cant even describe it.

I told you i would die without you, and i just might.

BY THE WAY, I DON'T FEEL THIS WAY ANYMORE, I'M OVER HIM.

Answer 1

Its sweet but you sound a little desperate and needy... and that's not good.

Answer 2

welllllllll on his side you might of sounded neady but i know how you felt. its a horrible fealing but if hes a good guy he would of thaught it was sweat. but he might think you still feal that way so you should prob write him back and say that your over him.

Answer 3

I FELL THIS WAY LONG TIME AGO BUT I DOT OVER IT 2

Answer 4

Some people are calling you pathetic, I don't agree. I don't agree with your feelings, & I could never write something like that - but it's good because you got your feelings across & you somewhat made me feel what you felt. You have a way with words & using them to make others understand you, so in my opinion - yes it's good.

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Answer 5

Well, I like it. I can almost connect. Only it sounds a lot like a suicide note.

Answer 6

WOW. he didntt deserve you. it was nice :]

Answer 7

I'm glad your over it.. u was sounding pathetic

Answer 8

its good that u took ur time to write that it shows that u cared about him

Answer 9

thats lovely - i love creative people =)

Answer 10

Good because this show how foolish you would be if you still felt this way.

Answer 11

it all sounds very said and done

like it's used in every movie and book

Answer 12

Good? no, i'd prolly throw it away after the second paragraph cuz it gets boring. "take me back" notes really arent my thing anyhow.

Answer 13

using guilt to get a guy back is stupid

Answer 14

very awesooooooooome. since ur over him, now what?

Answer 15

sounds a little desperate... guys like a challenge

Answer 16

i liked it when u said this  "I would give anything to have one more day with you" and a bunch of other stuff too. I like it its really good.

Answer 17

i like that! its really good your over it but still the way you make it sound you put eberything you had into the relationship but he didnt put anything into it.....most of the stuff you said in there were true so i applaud you for having the guts to put this on the internet

Answer 18

nope

Answer 19

haha its good. and touching very  touching.but guys are jerks and he probably would of laughed and i donno play hard to get even if he dont wnat u,dont ever crawl back and stuff.

glad ur overhim now tho

Answer 20

This isn't stupid or pathetic.

You were obviously in love with this man.

This isn't a silly letter. This is poetry. It's pure emotion. The kind that can only be shown when your heart is broken and you feel like you're going to die.

With some tweaking and spelling checks this could be a good poem.

Reminded me so much of my ex-girlfriend that I teared up a little : /  

Answer 21

AWWWWWWWWWW THAT MADE ME CRY I FEEL THAT WAY ABOUT SOMEONE WHO DUMPED ME HERE I HATE MILEY BUT GOOGLE HER SONG GOODBYE IT FITS YOUR LETTER PERFECTLY

Answer 22

thats life so they say riding high in april and shot down in may

Answer 23

I'm gonna be hard on you. You should never write letters like that to an ex-boyfriend. It just makes them think less of you . If you get dumped, just get the eff over it and don't be so desperate. There's obviously someone way better out there for you

P.S. You're still stupid (: