I am a 52 YO miscreant and malcontent. Do I have a Flair for poetry? Maybe a Sharpie?

Question

This is my take on an early 20th Century American form called the LITTLE WILLIE. The roots of the Con-verb run in this direction.

Poetry…little bits

of my soul

splashed,

I’m posting,

knowing

it will be smashed,

I hope that your heart

can show pity,

Please don’t spit

on my cute

little ditty.

Answer 1

yea i would say that you have a knack for poetry and that you should get more pieces and try and send them to a publisher the worst that could happen is that you would get rejected but to try agian with a different one.

Answer 2

Pity, I can't imagine that anyone would spurt ink (or anything else) on your little ditty.

Answer 3

I tried the cheap marker from the Dollar Store, but the words don't come out right, stick with the Sharpie.

Answer 4

I depend on 2 bics.

one to write with, the other to set it afire.

Answer 5

Marvelous job I enjoyed it alot

A flair for writing is what you've got

so if writing you aspire to do

go ahead and good for you.   (an encouraging site for you would be helium.com)

Answer 6

Self effacing -Soul erasing - Writing is such a pleasure, no?

The culture vultures.....What would they do without malcontent miscreants?!?!?!

TD - Why don't writers ever use pencils ???

Answer 7

No pity for this ditty,

it's gritty and witty,

not to mention quite pretty.

No spit from me, T. D. This is solid, as always.