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I am a poet and i kind of have a bit of a writers block and i need help knowing some good sites to ?

by Guest21495  |  earlier

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some good sites to post my poetry?

The Reflective Window

Whats there to See but darkness?

When all you can look forward too is being turned down,

Thrown Out.

Whats there anymore?

But darkness in your own thoughts.

Darkness clouding your vision.

Knowing that this love doesn't exist.

Knowing He's the one clinging onto me.

Knowing I'm again the one giving up.

Finally.

I Don't blame you.

I don't blame another.

The only Blame.

Is me.

My only shame

Is myself in the mirror.

Horror

I Don't even know that person in that window.

The Reflective Window.

I Don't even want to know that persons story.

I Know its Pain.

I See her misery.

I See the change in her.

Her face different.

To her.

Her emotions.

Lost.

Who is she?

The destructive girl.

Who's To Blame When she wants to be unnoticed?

The scars on her knees,

They match my own.

The destroyed look in her face matches my emotions.

The actor behind the curtain.

Matches me.

Premonition.

Revelation.

Shes not her.

Shes me.

Destroying others.

destroying me.

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  1. to flow within a wave of thought like a cloud hidden bird's narrow wings in flight drops dead in the wet sand......


  2. try poerty.com

    i won $10,000 on a contest

  3. I agree, you have writer's block, that is not poetry.  It is too choppy and has no flow of words and lines to give it a sense of congruity to hold it together.  It is repetitive and redundant in spots, and needs better punctuation and line management.

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