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I am going to try to write a poem, Do you want to read it?

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Brown eyes for me are s**y and deep

Red eyes maybe you need some sleep

Blue eyes to me are honest and true

Green eyes mean your faithful and blue

Grey eyes mean your very wise

And Hazel means that men you despise

There you are, Change it around a bit and between us we have made up a bit of poetry.

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  1. Well i dont want to change it around, cause then it wouldnt be YOUR poem. But its very interesting, and in a lot of ways very true... i think maybe adding more detail in between the lines about each girl with the different eyes would be nice, and make it a little bit longer.... but i also think its fine just the way it is, i just have a thing for long poems..... Good job and keep on writing


  2. Lol..very nice. you are very poetic. I like that Murphy or Murry question of yours.

  3. Like like it can I try here one I just made up:

    Browns eyes for me are hard working and compassionate

    Red eyes are evil and full of hate

    Blue eyes to me are honest and faithful

    Green eyes mean you are truly beautiful

    Grey eyes means you are an excessive spender

    Lastly Hazel means your a cheap money saver

  4. no offense but i hated it

  5. Brown eyes to me seem s**y and sweet,

    Red eyes that maybe you might need more sleep.

    Blue eyes to me seem honest and true,

    Green eyes show courage and faithfullness too.

    Grey eyes are found in women most wise,

    But eyes that are hazel tell men they're despised.

  6. You used the wrong "you're." "Your" is for ownership ie; 'Your cat is black.' 'Is this your shoe?.' "You're" is the abbriviated form of "you are" ie; 'You're a very nice person.'

    Brown eyes for me are s**y and deep

    Red eyes maybe you need some sleep

    Blue eyes to me are honest and true

    Green eyes mean YOU'RE faithful and blue

    Grey eyes mean YOU'RE very wise

    And Hazel means that men you despise

    Describing someone with green eyes as 'blue' doesn't really make sense. Some other words that rhyme with true are: through, glue, new, view, into, pursue, taboo, overdue, hue.

    Sorry if any of that sounded harsh, I didn't mean for it to come off that way.

  7. good luck but in a way to me its sorta insulting but try again

  8. amazing

  9. The 's**y' part reuined the poetry.

  10. interesting.

    i believe i am the first one
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