Question:

I am in a mood. Does this poem reveal how I feel?

by  |  earlier

0 LIKES UnLike

Prophecies

by Elaine P

Be silent!

Listen to the stars!

Hear the faint music

of the Universe.

Raise your eyes!

Regard the fig tree!

See the luscious fruit

of the oasis.

Carve your words!

Shape tablets of stone!

Sculpt poems to warn

of the end of days.

 Tags:

   Report

18 ANSWERS


  1. ahh no, sorry


  2. yes u r happy awaiting the end in your own words

  3. I would go with pensive.

    Wonderful strophe about the fig tree.

  4. whatchu talkin ubout

  5. It sounds like you are pondering the world, our existence and how long it will be.

  6. What? Quatrains again...?

  7. it seems like someone said something to you and that you didnt want to hear it as you thought it was wrong of them to say it so yh it seems like ur in a mood but meh its just what i think i wouldn't know

  8. I would say that it reveals how you feel in true Elaine style. Enigmatic, Beautiful, and slightly Fatalistic. There is a message in your soul that screams in your poetry, that poetry itself must be the scream. Epic and excellent, the child of your mood is beautiful, as is her maker.

  9. Apocalyptic prophecies often unheard, echo through history.  Maybe poems will make these finally heard.

  10. You bin hangin round the Ponderosa way long lil one...time to get some sunshine on yer face.

    Righteous and ready to meet challenges. Positive and passionate. That's the sort of inspired mood you are in.

    Pick one of them.

    BTW - Strong words....well placed.

  11. Are you feeling depressed today, too? Seems like a lot of people (in different sections) are feeling bad today.  Gideon and I have feelings of something about to happen - and now you - foretelling of the end of days.  Strange times indeed. ♥

  12. Interesting poem...but it's hard to tell your mood from it.

  13. Your poem doesn't make much sense to me.

  14. sounds like to me,you what to back up for some quiet time with you! Nothing wrong with that, Lovely poem.

  15. Tasteless verbs.

  16. sounds like be aware of your surroundings cause everything can come off as a lesson.

    i'm guessing your mood is relaxed or yearning to learn from others.

  17. To me it says "Take time to stop and smell the roses before there is no more time to take."

  18. Are you talking about being a prophet?  Cheers !!!!

Question Stats

Latest activity: earlier.
This question has 18 answers.

BECOME A GUIDE

Share your knowledge and help people by answering questions.
Unanswered Questions