I am only 16 year old? A POEM?

Question

life is just some-then.

i wish i was not hear right now.

i cry.

i hurt.

but i dint care.

life is just some then people said hey or love you i thank.

but i dint care.

i am only 16.

i wish sometime i was in a dream and go away for ever.

i no sometime in this crazy poem i am witter you made not care or dint though i am tell the true but i am my life is h**l. so what is at for you tell me.

Answer 1

I read and re- read your poem, I analysed it, dissected it, mulled over the contents in relationship with the age of the writer and I came up with the conclusion that I had the first time I read it. Its absolutely and irrefutably the worst piece of literary garbage I have ever had cause to read and in my time teaching English to mature students, I assure you, I have seen some. I know what I am talking about. Your grammar is appalling as is your spelling, why you don't use the spell checker is beyond me. Still, I doubt that this will be the last piece that I will read that will astound me. Your problem lies with your inner self, speak to a parent or teacher or someone in authority, you have some severe problems.  

Answer 2

the hardest thing to do

is saying your sorry

through and through

pain eclispes rational and logic

young in body

but old in mind