I am poem...plz read =]?

Question

I am a person who is misunderstood

I wonder...how to live on

I hear...the childrens laughter and play

I picture...a days dawn

I want...all my pain to go away

I am a person who...is misunderstood

I feel...like i cant live on

I worry...about starting anew

I wish...i could be a better person

I hurt...because i dont know you

I am a person who...is misunderstood

I understand...i am who i am

I think...about how life should be

I dream...like a person danmed

I try...do the right thing

I strive...for a breath of fresh air

I hope...for my heart to sing

I am a person misunderstood

i think it ok but not spectatcular (well of course not spectatcular)

but let me know whatchu all think

Answer 1

I'll say this:  Don't stop writing.

You may want to read poetry from some of the greats and try to mimic them.  (Just one or two poems in their style will help you get a feel.)  Being able to write poetry in other poet's style will help you learn more tricks, poetically.  It will help you find what you like and don't like.

Again, don't stop writing!

Answer 2

where you get this

Answer 3

Luv it ^_^

Answer 4

great concept!  very clever & interesting

I think you have some talent -- keep writing!!!!

Answer 5

i like it

i think its almost spectactular